January 25, 2011
Dear Students:
I hope this year is off to a bang, as in pots and pans and sparkle and excitement! This semester is going to whiz by I have that much prepared for you (smile). You will not be bored. English 5/211? What is this course all about and why bother?
I love rhetoric or the art of argumentation. I think the mastery of critical thinking and argumentation is an invaluable skill which translates into every aspect of one’s life. I used to teach argument in my developmental courses. We analyzed arguments, practiced drawing Venn diagrams, and became quite adept at identifying deductive and inductive arguments and noting whether they were claims of fact, policy, or value.
Audience is key when preparing a brief and we learned how to both identify our audiences and figure out how to address them, that is, identify concepts we both agree on. Agreement is a good place to start when dealing with controversy—which is another name for argument.
We learned that there were no absolutes and to think so was alienating to one’s audience who might be that exception one excludes.
I guess this is the attorney/lawyer wannabe talking. I actually took LSAT and applied to Stanford and to New School many years ago. I even got letters back from both, but decided to go to the University of San Francisco and get my masters in writing instead, a choice I do not regret.
Funny it was in a Teaching Writing course that I learned about thesis sentences and how to structure an argument. This was back in 1995-’97. Another reason why I wanted to go to USF was sentimental. My dad used to work there when I was a child. He’d tell me stories about drunken priests—too much communion wine and how much he liked working there. I think the Jesuits liked my dad too.
I grew up in San Francisco at a time when BART was an idea whose tracks were laid when I was admitted into UC Berkeley under Affirmative Action, and MUNI was on strike. I used to walk past San Francisco City College to the Geneva Station. We lived on Holloway at Granada Avenue (a street we lived on as well).
Prior to this, my family lived in Visitation Valley –we're from New Orleans. When my father was released from Angola State Prison, he sent a bus ticket to the welfare office which kicked my mother off aide and so my young mother, baby brother and I caught the Greyhound bus to Northern California where we lived first in San Francisco's Fillmore District in a rooming house—the bathroom and kitchen were shared.
Then we moved to the projects on Brookdale. I attended John McLaren Elementary School. My mother would comb my hair while I slept, breakfast set on the table before she left. My job was to get my bad brother up—he was five, feed him and get the two of us to class each morning. After school I’d go to the lower yard and grab his hand and we’d walk home. Our deaf neighbor Kathy would watch us for Mama. I remember her dog and her bright red hair. On paydays, my mother would treat us to warm cashews from Sears or Woolworth's. She also bring home fruit candy slices and around Thanksgiving and Christmas, fruit cake which she’d soak in rum. I have really delicious memories of that time. On New Year's Eve she'd let us smell the bubbles in her champagne. They tasted like tickles.
My mother worked at the Naval Shipyard in Hunter’s Point. She was a keypunch operator. Later she was transferred to Mare Island and to Treasure Island. (Treasure Island was beautiful.) My dad was unemployed a lot and absent the rest of the time. But when he was employed he worked as counselor at Bayview Mental Health Agency and as a house painter and a custodian for the San Francisco public school system.
My mom and dad had an on again, off again relationship—more off than on, and then more on than off.
Yes, it was kind of dysfunctional, but I have had therapy around co-dependence and trust issues developed in my formative years and I think I am getting better, even if not completely well yet (smile). Let’s just say, I’m functional (smile).
No seriously, I had a great childhood as childhoods go. I had art classes at the deYoung Museum. I went to symphonies, the opera and dance performances at the San Francisco Opera House. My mother took us to see Michael Jackson and James Brown. I sculpted and drew and dreamed of being an artist or an architect or a medical illustrator. What I really wanted to do was paint signs over the freeway, but my mentor told me girls couldn’t paint those kinds of signs. I didn't know the word sexist then.
I came of age during at the height and demise of the Nation of Islam and at the same time, the Black Panther Party. Black Power was swirling overhead and I think the magic dust settled within me, because those movements have shaped a world view, which for a few tweaks and tucks I still hold today.
I have always loved to write. I remember having a poem: Life is Nature, Nature is Life, published in the sixth grade journal. Writing was my entre into the gifted and talented courses in junior high where I wrote original plays which my classmates performed for the school. I attended Visitation Valley Jr. High until I transferred to Muhammad University of Islam where I graduated at fifteen and a half, class valedictorian.
I was a young mother, 20, though not as young as my mother, 15. I have two daughters and an ex-husband (smile). I also have a lovely granddaughter who is eight, as of January 22.
I enjoy what I do, teach people to write. I am very good at what I do. All students need to do is invest the time and good results are guaranteed. Seriously, writing is magical, but the skill is not magic—anyone can learn to be a good writer.
I have had a few careers: property management for HUD subsidized properties, family daycare owner, preschool teacher, elementary school teacher, high school teacher, site director for YMCA after school program, AIDS prevention educator and volunteer recruiter, housewife (smile), mother, and now college professor. I currently serve on just one board: California Coalition for Women Prisoners. My hobbies are: writing and poetry, dancing, camping, cycling and travel.
What else? I just returned from West Africa, last week, and have had a stomach ache for most of it. I hope at this reading I am feeling better. I am still waking up at 12 midnight. The time difference is eight hours. I visited Senegal and Mali. I attended the World Festival of Black Art and Culture in Dakar and the Festival in the Desert in Timbuktu. It was an annual trek I have been making since 2009. Last year I went to Haiti twice as well.
I have an Internet Radio show and an on-line journal www.wandaspicks.com, www.blogtalkradio.com/wandas-picks I am also a contributor to the Women’s Magazine program on KPFA 94.1 FM I write for a community newspaper, the San Francisco Bay View, where I am arts editor. I have been a journalist for about 20 years now. Publications I have written for are: the Oakland Tribune (Good News), the San Francisco Chronicle (Pink section), the Examiner (Arts), the Montclarion, The Berkeley Voice, Black Issues in Higher Education, the Berkeley Daily Planet.
If students aren't too busy, perhaps we can attend a play together. I highly recommend Don Reed's E-14th Street at the Marsh in Berkeley.
Peace and Blessings,
Professor Wanda Sabir
Sunday, January 23, 2011
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English 5
27 January 2011
Introduction Letter
Prof. Sabir & Fellow Students:
My name is Kate. My birth certificate says “Kathleen” and I do adore that name, but I rarely use it outside of business situations and when my mother really wants my attention. My boyfriend knew me only as “Kate” until we had been together for a month, and was quite upset to find out there was more to it then that. Took him another month to pronounce “Kathleen” instead of “Kate-leen.” I often spell my name k8 when I sign my art pieces. I am an artist of many forms and I am attending school at DVC, CCC, BCC and Alameda in an attempt to finish the classes I need and transfer to a four-year after this semester. I will then work toward a BA and single subject teacher credentials in Art & English. I write creatively and sporadically. I am looking forward to using this class as a launching point to develop better skills as an essay writer.
I was born in Berkeley and raised in El Cerrito. I spent very breif portions of my life in Davis, California, Leesburg, Virginia, and Redondo Beach, California. I am happy to be back in the East Bay during this time in my life. I am lucky enough to have a family that supports my going back to school and taking longer than I planned to finish. I am 25 living with my grandparents and little sister. My sister is 18 and attending DVC with hopes of transferring to BYU in the coming months. It frustrates me sometimes that my 18 year old sister and I are in similar boats education-wise and that I am not leaps and bounds ahead of her, but she is brilliant, so I am proud of her. My mother and brother live about five minutes away from us and my whole local family (including aunts, uncles and cousins) gets together weekly for dinner in my grandparents home. I am dating a wonderful man who I plan to marry in the coming years and when I'm not at school, working or with my family I enjoy the company of his two young sisters and niece.
I currently work as a Desk Host at a hotel in Berkeley. It is not work in my preferred field, but I enjoy it. I recently gave up an internship at Richmond Public Library as a tutor in order to complete much needed college units. I miss working with the kids and hope I can find another tutoring gig or education-based job that fits into my busy schedule. In the past I have also been a private, in-home tutor for kids with ADHD and Asperger's Syndrome, an after-school art teacher, a live-in & live-out nanny and in high school I bussed tables at a small family restaurant. I speak a little spanish and even less ASL, but I have found both useful living in the bay area and working with kids. It also helps when trying to communicate with my future mother-in-law who speaks only Spanish. I anticipate learning much more of that language in the coming years.
Something I have noticed about myself in my years at community college, is that I can be an impatient learner. When in a classroom full of peers asking questions, I find myself wanting to move on with it all as soon as I understand the material. When teaching, I don't find myself frustrated, but when learning it is a struggle. Because of this I have taken a number of courses online, so I can move along at a faster pace if I feel the need. I am looking forward to taking your class on site and I will be working on my patience.
Looking forward to learning & improving;
Kate Freeman
Melvin Pandey
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English 5
27 Jan,2011
Hello, my name is Melvin Pandey. I was born here in Richmond California, but my family is originally from Nepal. I lived in Nepal for the first ten years of my life and moved here in late 2001. I currently live in Alameda, which is where I have lived for almost 9 years now. I went to Haight Elementary School, then Wood Middle School, and then graduated from Alameda High School in 2009. I have been a full time student here at Alameda College here since I graduated high school. I have decided to transfer as a nursing major after switching from Political Science. Beside school I also work full time as a server at a Sizzler restaurant in Albany. My interested are in cars, running, working out and just relaxing and enjoying life. I love to go to car shows and look at different kind of cars and I am going to get my motorcycle license soon and will most likely buy a bike after I get my license. I use to run about 8 miles every other day but for the last several months I have been overwhelmed by school and work, thus have not run as often as I would like to. I also love to lift weights however like with running I just do not have that much time right now with school and work. I hope to learn something new and develop my reading and writing skills further in your class and enjoy my time in your class.
Melvin Pandey
Sandahl von Sydow
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English 5
27 Jan 2011
My name is Sandahl von Sydow. I am originally from Bakersfield, Ca. I am also multi-racial.
As a multi-racial individual I have to constantly negotiate my identity in a society that likes to organize people by race, ethnicity, gender, etc. I try my best to keep an open mind on all issues, especially those involving race or ethnicity.
I relish being challenge and working with people who are engaged in the learning experience. I love having dynamic conversation about touchy topics. I look forward to the experiences this class has to offer.
Jeff Norkunas
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Egl 5
Jan 27 2011
Hi, my name is Jeff and I have been living in the bay area for the last six years, they have been six rough years. I started out with a backpack and hope. Upon arriving I realized that the rumors of the bay area being a place of equality and diversity were only half true. Yes, there is huge diversity, but the equality is far from a reality, and my experiences have led me to believe that the ideas of tolerance and compassion are just words for most of the area. Click up, find your group, that where you’ll find a home. These ideals were unknown to me before I came.
I was born in St. Louis Mo., and was raised in a middle class family by a single mother that worked very hard to make sure that I received a good start in life through my early education. My teen years were spent in Florida in the ‘80’s and I learned a lot about life then.
17 I entered the military and found out a lot about myself and the rest of the country’s population. From attending one of the best school districts in the country for elementary and middle schools and a mediocre high school, I never realized the advantages of education until boot camp.
After the military I stayed in So. Cal. for a few years, and experienced life in the fast lane. It went a little to fast for me and I returned to the mid-west for about 4 years. Reconnecting with family and friends was a great way to slow down and grow.
After that I got wander lust and started moving around the U.S., I’ve lived in ten different states and have seen a lot of America, yet time and greed have changed this country for the worse. Maybe I’m just jaded but from living here for the last few years I feel the problems of the country come from the ideals held by the bay area, click up, find your group. My group was America, and without it I find myself struggling to fit into anything less than a melting pot.
Andrea Giang
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English 5
27 January 2011
Dear Professor Sabir and Classmates,
My name is Andrea. I was born in San Francisco and pretty much lived there my whole life. I currently commute from San Francisco every morning to Alameda using AC Transit.
I'm half Chinese and half Vietnamese so I know multiple languages. I can speak Vietnamese, Cantonese, and Chiu Chau, but I can't read or write except for what's on a menu. I have always been interested in Japanese so I began studying it in middle school and stayed with the language throughout high school. I have about six years of Japanese experience. I am currently taking a Spanish class here since I felt that Spanish is a useful language to learn, especially for health care related careers.
I want to pursue a career in dental hygiene. And I'm applying to schools right now. It's very hectic trying to stay on top of school and working on applications at the same time. But hopefully, I'll manage.
From this class, I am hoping to learn more about critical thinking and analytical writing. I hope to be able to use these skills in the future. I want to develop my writing skills and hopefully be able to express my opinions through writing. I try to be on top of my readings and never to procrastinate on my essays. For me, it’s important to turn in my best work and not just something that was done in a rush. I want to do my best.
I plan to do my best in this class to learn and to develop my writing. I want to be able to walk away from this class knowing how to analyze essays and express my opinions on what I had read.
Sincerely,
Andrea Giang
Paris Middleton
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English 5
29 January 2011
Dear Professor Sabir,
I am glad that I am taking your critical thinking class. I feel that it will help keep my mind running and challenge me to rethink things out. Well about me I am 19 trying to achieve big dreams. My number one dream is just to be happy. I recently have picked business as my major but I personally have no clue on what I would like to do “when I grow up”. They say that I have time to choose it but I’m just scared because it seems that people who have plans succeed more than people that don’t. It is just the logic I try to go by. I never felt like a total failure but I always felt like I could push myself harder. My strengths are being able to write a story, my limitations are my spelling.
I value life because when I was about 10, my mom became bedridden. My sister, and I, had to take care of her. We had to essentially become our mother. We paid the bills, washed the clothes, grocery shopped, and even took ourselves to school. I guess you can say this made me grow up a little fast, but I felt like I was still a kid, I just had more life skills than most kids. As my grandmother says, we already knew how to take care of a household, even cooking, while we were very young. She tells my mother that she taught us well. My mother said she wanted us to know what we needed to do in case she wasn’t around.
My mother worked hard to support me and my older sister, she was disabled so her income consisted of Welfare, then SSI, and hustling on the side (recycling, food banks). Still, growing up, I had just about everything that I wanted. We were not rich, or middle classed. I don’t really know how my mother did it, but she never let us do without anything. My family consisted of my mom, my sister and my alcoholic father, who was there when he wanted to be. When he was sober he helped, but he needed help. I felt that my grandmother was my father. She even said so to me and my sister when we were little.
In middle school it seems that I would get teased about being too nice, so I spent most of my school time trying to fit in. She said the only reason they tease you is because you care about what they say. You know who and what you are. If they know they can get your goat by teasing you, they will continually do it. Once they see their teasing does not bother you, they will stop.
I never really took school serious. I mean I passed most of my classes, but never excelled like I knew I could. My mom always reminded me (and still does), and my sister, of how important school is, and to value knowledge. In about the end of the 7th grade, I changed my outlook on things. I no longer cared what people said. Her words helped me a lot. I am glad, because the teen years are where you find yourself in very unfamiliar situations. I found it weird because when I got to high school people started to praise me for being different. I guess you can say I was popular.
Around the end of my junior year, I found the most amazing friends. They understand that everyone is different, and they never tried to change me into someone I not. We always stayed together. We were unconventional “cool” kids. We didn’t do drugs; we made friends with everyone, including the staff. I didn’t mind socializing with everyone, doing what others liked as well as what we liked. We were just us. I adopted from my mother is to never judge a book or a person by their cover. You never know a person story of why they are who they are, or why they are where they are. I feel that God, has blessed me in so many ways I always tell myself that I am glad that I was not born rich because I might never have experienced struggle, and I wouldn’t be the strong person I am today. I feel that I will bring spunk and laughter to the class. I always loved too mix education with comedy because it makes it fun to learn. I would like to learn how to Critical think correctly.
Your Student,
Paris
Henry Wu
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English 5
29 January 2011
Hi, my name is Henry. I am a first generation immigrant. My parents brought me here to China when I was 5 years old. It was my first time ever riding an airplane and I was unable to sleep the whole way. It wasn’t until my dad tricked me into thinking it was night outside that I finally slept a few hours. I went to elementary school in Southern California in a city called Alhambra. During that time, I was just beginning to be exposed to the American culture and enjoyed long episodes of Power Rangers. It was also the first time I experienced a robbery. One night after returning home from dinner, we found that our light was on, even though we always close the light when we leave home. My dad rushed out of the car and told us to wait in the car and lock the door. Of course, I had no idea what was going on and it wasn’t until the police arrived that I knew a robber had broken into our house.
After a couple of years, my parents were able to buy a house in Rowland Heights, and we moved there when I was eight to begin the third grade. I would live in Rowland Heights until now. In high school, I was part of the IB and AP programs and didn’t have much of a social life outside of hours of Counter-Strike, which was one of the most popular computer games during my time in high school. My best friend and I had monitor tans throughout our high school years.
During senior year of high school, I finally found my first job to occupy my free time. I worked at a local kindergarten teaching art. Being a teacher was a really great experience and I loved it when the kids finished their drawings and excitedly ran up to show me their accomplishment. As their teacher, it gave me a great sense of accomplishment for me and has seriously made me consider a career in teaching later on.
In English 5, I want to improve my writing skills. I always felt writing essays was one of the toughest challenges in high school and I look forward to the challenge this class presents.
Mercedes Rawlyk
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English 5
27 January 2011
Dear Sabir and classmates:
Hi. My name is Mercedes Alexandria Rawlyk. I was born in Oakland,CA. I have lived in San Leandro almost all my life up until the end of my junior year in high school, when i moved to Alameda. Although, i have lived in San Leandro I have always attended Alameda schools. I am the oldest child of four kids. I have two sisters of the ages sixteen and eleven, and a brother at the age of seven. So yes I do get blamed for everything.
I am a very hard-working person, who can get pretty lazy. I am very motivated to do well in school and be successful in life. My goals are to transfer to a four year university after my sophomore year at the College of Alameda. My major is not yet decided, but I am leaning towards a medical examiner or somewhere in the medical field.
When i turned fifteen i got my first job at a movie theater. Ever since then i have worked two jobs and went to school maintaining a 3.5 G.P.A in my classes. Unfortunately, i feel that what i learned in high school did not prepare me for college and at times feel very stressed because things are very difficult. I will not give up and continue to push my way through this semester. Last semester i relieved a 3.3 G.P.A. I hope this semester not only will i receive better grades, but to leave with enough knowledge to advance.
I am a very easy-going person, who loves to meet new friends. I really like study groups to because they make my life so much easier and helps me understand things better. i am really looking forward to this semester with high goals. I plan to do the best i can and hopefully leave this class with the grade I wanted.
Sincerely,
Mercedes Rawlyk
Christian Del Rosario
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English 5
January 30, 2011
Dear Professor Sabir and Classmates,
My name is Christian Alexlexander Del Rosario,I am Filipino-American, born and raised in Oakland CA. It was pretty rough around my area growning up, so I never really played out side; I would always stay indoors if I hung out with either family or frends. But, if I did decide to go out I would usually go play basketball in alameda, because it was safe. I love hanging out with friends, and i do ejoy parties, thats my comfort area. I ejoy others peoples' company. I get along with almost everyone; there are those occasional rotten apples, if you know what I mean? I like to make people smile or laugh, I'm the "Jokester" in the group of my friends.
Since I recently turned 21, in June, I feel like I got to take things more serious, get my priorities straight and become more responsible, and just grow up. I always played around and always procrastinated, and I realized I got to quit that. So, I'm turning over a new leaf and starting fresh. I also realized I wanna do something with my life, and education is the way to go! I wanted to become a police officer, I can see myself doing that type of profession, I'm fit and in shape to become one! But, then I also wanted to become an engineer, to build, create or fix; I enjoy taking thing apart and putting it back together. But, thats a long shot for me right now, so I decided to major in business administration, so I can have atleast a degree in something. I am close to transfering so I'm heading that route.
I looking forward to this class! I've taken English 5 before, but like I said, I wasnt taking things seriously back then. Im readying and prepared for this course and I hope to get the best out of this class.
Dylan Young
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English 5
January 30 2010
Dear Professor Sabir and Classmates,
My name is Dylan Kiyoshi Young, I am Chinese and Japanese and i was born and raised in Oakland. My family has been in the bay area for a long time now as i am the Fourth generation to be here. Although most people who live in Oakland say they love it i cant exactly say the same. Its been an up and down road living here but i can definitely say part of my college motivation is to get out of here.
Throughout high school i did what i had to but not much more, getting mostly B's in my classes. My first semester in college changed my perspective on how i should handle school and i am motivated and involved in my classes now for the first time ever. It gets a bit difficult to balance school with other things such as having 2 jobs, a girlfriend and trying to stay out with friends but i am finding a better balance every day.
I am aiming towards getting my GE classes done within 2 or 3 years and transferring to a UC (Preferably Davis or Santa Barbra) where I plan on majoring in Mechanical Engineering. I have an older sister who attends school at Sacramento state where she is one semester away from getting her BA in nutrition.
School is my number one priority above everything else going on and i am looking forward to this class and working with everyone else in it. I am ready to wrap my mind around what English 5 has to offer and work with everyone to make sure we all do great this semester!
Ebonee Chambers
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English 5
31 January, 2011
My Name is Ebonee Chambers. I turned 22 this past Friday and I didn’t do much but spend time with close relatives and friends. Its taken me a while to finally set a career in stone. I posses so many skills that its hard for me to settle on doing just on thing my entire life. I am driven but also a free spirit.
My mother only has one child, myself, as for my biological father I know of 4 Girls who are all older than me. I only got a chance to spend time with 2 of them on 2 completely separate occasions. The last occasion was with the 2nd oldest of the girls, Mercedes. Her and I fought but we loved each other. She protected me when ever I needed protection. She had a thick country accent and looked like an older version of me. Anyways her and I grew extremely close when my mother left my father. I was barley in elementary school and I remember staying in a hidden women’s shelter. My sister ended up moving back to Virginia and me and my mother moved into my grandmothers home. My mother got married and we moved into a condo. I learned a few years later that my step father had another step daughter from a previous marriage in which his wife passed away. She came to live with us for a while but she was misguided for so long it was to much for my age. My sister Mercedes passed away a couple of years ago, I plan on establishing a research foundation in her name in the near future.
I graduated high school in a 2 year relationship with Honors and Scholarships from my city’s school district. Senior year I was editor and chief of the year book, Junior year I was a varsity cheerleader, Sophomore year I was a dancer, and freshman year I was a freshman (smile) taking advanced Spanish. I lost myself after high school for a while. I attended a University and although I didn’t party hard I didn’t study hard either. My Grandmother passed away, she gave me the aspiration to become a geriatrician. I lost myself and hope for a while. I moved back home but next door to my parents, its actually not that bad.
As for now I am excited to be taking English 5. I get to finally put my thoughts onto paper critically. I look forward to each and every assignment, as I know it will only help me become a better English student.
sana waheed
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English 5
31 January, 2011
Dear professor Sabir
My name is Sana and I am originally from Pakistan. I have been in United sates for about 9 years. I live in Vallejo, my work place is in Berkeley, but I am taking classes in Alameda. Which is kind of a long commute. I lived in Berkeley 8 years but recently I moved in Vallejo because I and my husband bought a house here. You might think that why I am still in college of Alameda. It’s because I have spent about two and half year at Alameda College for the course calls Apparel Designing and Merchandising. And after that I am trying to transfer USF. This is my first learning institute in United States and I still love this college.
Since I am married to a well educated man he did his PHD in United Kingdom; always encourages me to finish my graduation. So I am trying to take serious interest in my studies.
Randy Tran
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English 5
January 31, 2011
Hello Professor Sabir and fellow classmates! My name is Randy Tran, and I am twenty-two years old. I am of Vietnamese nationality, but was born here in San Diego, California. My family fled Vietnam during the ending days of the Vietnam War, when the Vietnamese Communists had launched an all-out offensive sweeping the country to its furthermost southern borders. On the way to the United States of America, we had taken refuge in the Philippines for some time. In the Philippines, my family learned the English language by going to school. My mom had me when we were there, until we were accepted by the United States government to be allowed to come into the U.S. And so I was born in San Diego at our first home in the U.S. in 1988. Then we moved to East Oakland in the 60s blocks in 1989, where my younger sister named Linda was born. She is also the youngest sibling, the last of a large family of 7 siblings total. Growing up, there were many times members of the family misunderstood one another. My parents had been arguing since our stay in the Philippines, arguing and fighting, and so therefore had a bitter relationship. They use to tell us that it was only for us that they were only able to (and forced) to have to stay together. And so there was a lack of leadership in our family since they were always busy arguing and unable to come to a compromise as adults. Amongst the siblings, everyone did not really talk to or hang out with one another, and most would resort to friends out of the family. Simply because everyone felt that family only brought problems, frustrations, and ultimately unhappiness. This was my case as well I must say. Growing up through grade school, one of my main focus was to find great friends, many great friends. The more, the merrier. My group of friends and I had established a sense of brotherhood. We did everything together. We learned life through experiences, and overcame any obstacles together. But that was then, and this is now. As a mature adult, I had realized that even though times were fun hanging out, I must also realize to appreciate and repay the great debt I owe to my family, for giving me life, raising me up to be what I am today. Now, I feel as if my family feel that they have done their job in raising me, and now as an adult, it is time for me to succeed by setting goals and achieving them. I am here at this step. When I become successful, academically and financially, it will be my time to carry on the family up with me. This is what I am working towards.
My responsibilities in current times including a course workload of 12 units, or full-time student, and part-time work of about twenty hours a week. I am taking English 5, History 2A and 2B, and Philosophy 1. These are my remaining courses required in order to finish up my last semester here at a community college and transferring to SFSU in the upcoming Fall 2011. I am majoring in Political Science and/or History, and plan to go the Pre-law route. So you and I, Professor Sabir, have something in common in which we must taste the LSAT together (any suggestions how to execute best are welcome!). I plan to become an attorney when academically successful, but in which field of law, for now, is unknown. I hope I will find out soon so that I may take the necessary course of action which will best prepare me for my career. As my job goes, I do commission sales. My job can pay the bills and provide spending money, but it tears me apart at times. It is so inconsistent!
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ReplyDeleteWhy am I taking this class? I am taking this class because not only that it is one of the remaining requirements necessary for me to proceed in reaching my goal of transferring to SFSU, it is important to me to be able to learn how to analyze, criticize, and advocate critically. I now realize that when communicating with another person, whoever it may be whether it is your friend, co-worker, or a person of some professional relation, that a conversation about something can be extremely vague and uninforming. I want to be able to think outside of my comfort zone, explore into the zone that is foreign to me, and deliver strong arguments. To me it is an invaluble skill, a product of a leader, who is respected, trusted, heard, and able to get someone to do as they would otherwise not. Looking forward to a semester of a fun learning environment!
Darin Lago
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English 5
31 January 2011
Response to the Introductory Letter
Wow! That was a very thorough and detailed introduction. The syllabus was also indeed thorough and I was able to find all the answers or questions I need in there. I admire that you love to help and that you enjoy teaching because I like to do the same. It brings a pleasant feeling of accomplishment when I am able to teach someone, or even do something simple such as donating blood to the Red Cross.
It seems like everyone has an interesting story about their childhood or why they are here. So here is mine...
I won't go into my early years, not that it was bad, but I want to focus on what's happening right now and the future. After graduating high school, I felt like I wasn't ready to go to college and so I began working. I worked at various interesting jobs such as a refinery operator for Chevron. However, I wasn't happy with any of the jobs and in 2009 I began taking classes as a full-time student at COA and Laney.
In the beginning of last year, I was living on my own and struggling to make ends meet. I received a phone call from my dad saying he lost his job and no one in the car industry is hiring due to the recession. The major problem was he was the only income for the rest of my family. My brother was about to graduate from high school, my mom was unemployed, and the bills began to pile up. So I did the right thing and moved back home, got a full time job to help pay for the bills, helped with selling stuff we didn't need, and fixed up the apartment.
By the end of last year, my dad finally found a steady job and told me that if I go back to school, he will pay for my books and tuition. So here I am, back to complete what I started, and get on with my life. I plan to transfer to a four college and get my Bachelors degree in either chemistry or biology. I then plan to go back to the Chevron refinery with my degree or further my education to become a physical therapist. If for any reason I don't like what I am doing then I will become a teacher in my field of study. I have had plenty of time to figure out what I want to do along with back up plans just in case, and now it's time to work as hard as I can to get there.
Quyen Do
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English 5
February 9 2011
Dear Ms. Sabir,
My name is Quyen. I am from Vietnam. I have been through a lot. However, after reading your introduction letter, I felt like whatever I have been through is not as much as yours. To me, coming to this country means taking a big risk. I did not feel that way when I first came here, but now I feel it strongly.
We came here in 2006 to Portland, Oregon. Everything seemed to be very normal until the day we moved to California, which was two months after that. When we got here, everything was fine. My parents went back to Vietnam to take care of their business, leaving my two brothers and me here. We were living with my grandparents. We though everything would be ok. It seemed like it for a while.
I went to Alameda High School. My younger brother went to Wood Middle School. My older brother was here at College of Alameda; he also worked at a tax service office, which is still belong to my not-so-much-related uncle. That uncle's second wife is the daughter of my grandfather's sister's husband. Anyway, in the morning, my older brother would take me and my little brother to schools, then he had to go to work. In the after noon, at first, my aunt took us home; but later my brother had to do the work no matter what. It was like that for approximately a year.
As time went by, my grandmother would try to say bad things about my mother. The good thing was that I had lived with my mother longer than she had, so I knew how my mother lived. She tried to make my mother looked like a bad woman, that trying to cheat them, and not taking care of the family. Of course we did not believe those things. A couple months after that, my grandfather told my brother that we needed to get out of the house as soon as possible. At that time, my parents weren't here. We did not know what to do, so we had to call them so that they could get a flight. My father came and obviously my family got kicked out of the house. Until now, I do not know the reason that made us leave the house.
We found a little two-bedroom apartment in Alameda. We moved in the house at the beginning of 2007. Luckily, my younger and I were about to graduate from our schools, so we did not have to transfer to another high school, or middle school. At that time, my grandmother tried to provoke a fight between my father and my aunt. In Vietnamese culture, the younger person is not allowed to fight back against an older one, especially if they are brothers, sisters, or parents and children. However, under the permission of my grandmother, she was able to fight against my father. That made him very angry. He said that he would not have any contact with her anymore, unless she stands before our ancestors to say sorry. So we had been living here without contacting them for a long time. My father went back to Vietnam, so the three of us were living in this house together. We took care of each other. The time without my parents were very long. It seemed like a thousands years had gone by. Looking at the other kids having their parents pick them up made me feel lonely. I wished that my parents were there for me whenever I felt lonely. One year later, my parents came back here; suddenly, my mother got a stroke so they could not go back to Vietnam. I felt mostly upset but at the same, I also felt a little bit happy because my parents would have to stay with us then.
Getting to college in 2008, I was a very good student. I got A's and B's in my classes. But last year I messed up with my classes. I cut classes. I did not do my homework. I did not focus on school because I was hanging with some bad friends. Fortunately, I was able to stop myself last semester to get everything back together. That messing period caused me my GPA. It went from 3.883 to 2.7. That was a huge jump. It also costed me my financial aid. I ended up making an appeal form to get my financial aid back. But I made a stupid mistake at the end of the semester. I fainted right before the week of finals. Instead of discussing the problem with my counselor before everything was too late, I came up to my teachers and asked them to give me F's so I could retake the course later. With those F's, my appeal form was denied. So I have to do another appeal form this semester to get the money for this semester.
ReplyDeleteBeside school's problems, my life was pretty much ok until the end of last year. My grandfather got sick. He said he felt an extreme pain in the stomach. We called 911. He always claimed that he had stomach problem. But whenever he came to the hospital, the doctors would say that he had prostate problem. At that time, he did not want to accept the sickness; he said that the doctors lied just to get the money for his health insurance company. When he was in the hospital, he pulled everything on his body off, such as the IV's, the little stickers used to measure the heart beats. Blood was everywhere. He had to stay at the hospital. He did not want to cooperate with the nurses; he would try to escape from the hospital if he had a chance, so they had to tie him up. My family and I had to go back and forth between home and Summit hospital to take care of him. He would ask for scissors, knifes, anything that have pointy or sharp edges to cut the strings. Whoever stayed overnight with him, he would not let that person sleep. Even when he went home, he would pull out the cathedral because he thought it would be less painful if he did it. So again we had to take him back to the hospital three times in a row because of that. That stressed me out a lot. I wished everything would be ok when school started because I would need to concentrate on school's works.
School started. I have to take an almost easy semester because I would be moving to Oakland sometimes in this semester so I do not want the moving to interfere with school. I thought I would have a peaceful semester. But last week, my grandparents got into a fight. He hit her with a hammer. He got arrested. She was taken to the hospital. I had to go to court as a translator, and also a suspect's family member. I was embarrassed to be pointed out in the middle of the court room. Everybody turned to look at me with pairs of sympathetic eyes. I got phone calls from the police department, from the attorney, from the organization that helps seniors who got abused, from the lawyers. I was very stressed. I could not come to any of my classes last week. Now my grandfather is home. He is staying with us because he cannot be with his wife, according to the judge's order. I felt relief because I would not have to deal with my grandmother from now on. I do not know how long it would be, but I am happy with the order. I am back to classes. I only have to go to a few court days from now until the case ends, which I expect to be at least three to four years. I am a little more calm right now. I will have to focus on school right now because I just got back on track; I do not want to fall down the hill anymore.
I picked BioChem, which is a very hard major. I almost completed my General Education, only two more subjects to go. This is my last English course. I would try my best to complete this course. After this and the GE, I would only have to focus on my major subjects. I want to transfer to Cal-State East Bay. I used to dream of University of Berkeley, but since I have messed up, I know I would not have a chance to get into that school, at least for now. I want to complete my goal. I want to get my GPA back to where it is supposed to be. I want to be a better student.
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