Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Fall 2014 Syllabus


Critical thinking @ the College of Alameda with Professor Wanda Sabir
ENG 5 Course codes: 40009, Tuesday/Thursday 08:30AM to 09:45 AM

Class Meetings: Aug. 19-Dec. 4
Location: Room C-210

Holidays: 11/11; Instructor absence (Oct. 14)
Final Exam: Dec. 9, 8-10 AM (Portfolios due via e-mail by Dec. 12).
Drop dates: Aug. 21 (w/refund); April 31 (without/W); Nov. 15 (with/W).

Class blog: http://sabirscoaenglish5.blogspot.com/

Syllabus for English 5: Critical Thinking in Reading and Writing

English 5, 3 semester units, about 6000 written words, develops the ability to analyze, criticize, and advocate ideas. Critical thinking looks at the relationship between language and logic, introduces rhetoric or persuasive writing and tools students can use to evaluate information based on facts, perceptions, assumptions, evidence, reasons, inferences, judgments, induction, deduction and conclusions. Vocabulary is introduced so that students have the proper tools to discuss faulty thinking or flaws in the reasoning process and name the more common fallacies.

This level composition assumes competency in prose writing and reading ability so that more attention can be devoted to ideas rather than to grammar and mechanics. Students who will most likely succeed in this course passed English 1A with a “B” or better.

We will look at the role of language and semantics in critical thinking, social communications and propaganda. Students will also look at the fundamentals of problem solving, including considering and evaluating alternative solutions and perspectives. We will write a series of four (4) – 2-4 page essays which are 1. Analytical, 2. Argumentative and 3. Comparative evaluative essays on pertinent topics around the themes explored in the texts. Each of the four essays will use the Classical or Aristotelian, the Rogerian and/or the Toulmin model of argument.

Topics will come from our texts, films, and discussions, current event topics, or historical issues with current relevance. Three essays will utilize one of the text books: James Baldwin's The Fire Next Time; Tim Wise's Dear White America: Letter to a New Minority; Thandisiwe Chimurenga’s No Doubt: The Murder of Oscar Grant, and a book of your choice with a topic of current relevancy.

Required in these essays will be inclusion of at least 1-2 scholarly articles on the topic and a works cited/bibliography page(s) which is not counted as part of the 2-4 pages. The final will be an argument taken or developed from your book’s thesis. The argument style is up to the writer: Toulmin, Aristotelean, Rogerian. All arguments will be presented orally in small groups and in written form.

Essays
We will start all the essays in class and have peer reviews; however, I expect the first draft to receive a passing grade. If this is not the case, I suggest said student enlist the support and assistance of a competent tutor.

If any paper does not receive a passing grade, said student will have to write an essay wherein he or she discusses in third person how the writer can correct the errors, and revise or rewrite the essay. These essays are due the following day or following class meeting.

Readings
We will read a book every 3-4 weeks, beginning with Baldwin, then Chimurenga, ending with Wise. Students will select a book of their own they would like to cull an argument from.

I like to use films as teaching aides, but given the tight schedule, we will probably only see clips of a few pertinent films. The film assignments will be cyber-assignments started in class. Cyber-assignments are turned in on-line and are about a 250 word fast draft. Each student needs to respond on-line to two other posts. Be respectful in your comments. Even though we are only meeting two hours and a half a week, students will have three hours of homework weekly, maybe more if one is a slow reader. We will try not to deviate from the schedule, as we have three books plus a textbook to get through, so don’t get behind (smile).

We will probably not complete any in-class essays, as there just isn’t enough time. Most essays will be submitted via Internet. Make sure you include the assignment and your name in the subject line. There will be one group project and presentation on logical fallacies (both inductive and deductive reasoning – one each) inspired by the texts or taken from the field of commercial art or politics. We will do this in class. Buy the books and start reading.

To post on the blog, students need a gmail.com account. I am still thinking about using Moodle this semester.

The Plan
We will use the textbook: Writing Logically Thinking Critically, Sixth-Seventh Editions, by Sheila Cooper and Rosemary Patton (6th or 7th editions). It will give students theoretical basis to talk about the argument process. The book has exercises which we will complete in and outside of class meetings. Students are encouraged to develop study groups.

We will run the book chronologically:
Week 1: A Quick Guide to Integrating Research into Your Own Writing 210-214.

Practice pp: 210-214
Week 1-3: Chapters 1-2
Week 3-5: Chapters 2-3
Week 4-5: Chapters 3-4
Week 5-6: Chapters 4-5-6
Week 6: Chapter 6-7
Week 6-7: Chapter 7-8
Week 8/9: Review
Week 9/10: Review
(This is ambitious.)

Grading
The essays based on readings are a fourth of your grade, the daily essays and/or homework are another fourth, your midterm and final are another fourth and your portfolio is the final fourth. (Save all of your work.) The midterm will probably be one of the essays connected to a book. You can average the grades to see how to weigh the various components. Participation is included in the daily exercises and homework portion of the grade, so if your attendance is exemplary, yet you say nothing, you lose percentage points.

You will also need to spend at least an hour a week in the Writing Lab open M-F, 9-5 (L-234), or as needed, and have a teacher or tutor sign off on your assignments. If you are having trouble with grammar, then work on that. If you trouble is the essay writing process itself, work on that.

Have a tutor or teacher sign off on your essays before you turn them in; if you have a “R,” which means revision necessary for a grade or “NC-” which means “no credit,” you have to go to the lab and revise the essay with a tutor or teacher before you return both the graded original and the revision (with signature) to me. Also due with your revision is an essay about the essay which identifies the errors and how to correct them. Use a grammar/style book such as Diana Hacker’s Rules for Writers. Revise does not mean “rewrite,” it means to “see again.”

This course with limited class time should offer an invigorating discourse or dialogue for those students who love a challenge and approach the writing task eager, prepared and ready for what the course requires: English language fluency in writing and reading; a certain comfort and ease with the language; confidence and skillful application of literary skills associated with academic writing, plus familiarity, if not mastery, of the rhetorical styles used in argumentation, exposition and narration.

We will be evaluating what we know and how we came to know what we know, a field called epistemology or the study of knowledge. Granted, the perspective is western culture which eliminates the values of the majority populations, so-called underdeveloped or undeveloped countries or cultures. Let us not fall into typical superiority traps. Try to maintain a mental elasticity and a willingness to let go of concepts which not only limit your growth as an intelligent being, but put you at a distinct disadvantage as a species.

This is a highly charged and potentially revolutionary process - critical thinking. The process of evaluating all that you swallowed without chewing up to now is possibly even dangerous. This is one of the problems with bigotry; it is easier to go with tradition than toss it, and create a new, more just, alternative protocol.

Audience
This is not the class for the student who is not comfortable with writing essays, whose handle on grammar is shaky or loose, and/or whose reading skills – interpretation, critical analysis, comprehension and vocabulary, are limited. Obviously one cannot become an expert on anything meeting just twice a week for a little over two hours; however, the hope is that when you leave the course, you will be a stronger writer than when you arrived, have a better grasp of what is meant by rhetoric or the art of persuasion.

We will be honest with one another. Grades are not necessarily a complete assessment of one’s work; grades do not take into consideration the effort or time spent, only whether or not students can demonstrate mastery of a skill – in this case: essay writing. Grades are an approximation, arbitrary at best, no matter how many safeguards one tries to put in place to avoid such ambiguity. Suffice it to say, your portfolio will illustrate your competence. It will represent your progress, your success or failure this semester in meeting your goal.

Office Hours

I am available Tuesday mornings 10-12 noon by appointment. I am also available by appointment Thursdays 4-6 p.m. My office, D-219 is located in the D-216 suite.  My campus number is (510) 748-2286. Leave messages on my cell number which I will share with you when you introduce yourselves to me. The class email address is: coasabirenglish5@gmail.com

Let me know the day before, if possible, when you’d like to meet with me. I am more of a phone person. Texts are fine. If none of these times work, email me and we can set something up. I am on the island.

I’d like to wish everyone much success.

I’d advise students to exchange phone numbers with classmates (3), so if you have a concern, it can be addressed more expediently. Again study groups are recommended, especially for those students finding the readings difficult; don’t forget, you can also discuss the readings as a group in the Lab with a teacher or tutor acting as facilitator. Keep a vocabulary log for the semester and an error chart (taken from comments on essay assignments). List the words you need to look up in the dictionary, also list where you first encountered them: page, book and definition, also use the word in a sentence. You will turn this in with your portfolio.

Students are expected to complete their work on time. If you need more time on an assignment, discuss this with me in advance, if possible, to keep full credit. You lose credit each day an assignment is late and certain assignments, such as in-class essays cannot be made up. All assignments prepared outside of class are to be typed, 12-pt. font, double-spaced lines, indentations on paragraphs, 1-inch margins around the written work (see Hacker: The Writing Process; Document Design.)

The class blog is: http://sabirscoaenglish5.blogspot.com


Student Learning Outcomes (SLOs)


Apply tools of understand inferences to community, workplace and family situations.

Evaluate materials/data in terms of accuracy as well as relevance to home and workplace situations.

Identify logical fallacies in communication.

Conduct research identifying relevant and accurate materials from a variety of sources, including databases, professional publications, and other applicable materials.

Identify personal bias and other filters in order to evaluate community, family and professional materials objectively. 


Cheating

Plagiarism is ethically abhorrent, and if any student tries to take credit for work authored by another person the result will be a failed grade on the assignment and possibly a failed grade in the course if this is attempted again. This is a graded course.

Homework

If you do not identify the assignment, I cannot grade it. If you do not return the original assignment you revised, with an analysis essay, I cannot compare what changed. If you accidentally toss out or lose the original assignment, you get a zero on the assignment to be revised. I will not look at revisions without the original attached- no exceptions.

We will have a library orientation: date and time TBA.

Jot down briefly what your goals are this semester. List them in order of importance.
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First Assignment: Write a letter of introduction to me due by Thursday, August 28. Tell me something about yourself: anything you'd like to share. It stays with me: where you were born, who you are responsible for (smile), what languages you speak/write, your strengths, what you bring to the class, what you'd like to leave with and what if anything I need to know to facilitate your success.

Email your letter to me: coasabirenglish5@gmail.com. Don't forget to note the assignment in the subject line.

Second Assignments: Write a response to the syllabus and post it in the comment section on the blog. Be specific in your response. Post by August 25.
Something about me

I don't hold hands. No time for it. I don't pressure people or threaten. If this is the kind of motivation you need, I am not the one. I expect everyone to be an adult, to exercise time management skills and to pace him or herself so that deadlines are met. Plan so there is room for emergencies; leave nothing to last minute rush in as much as this is possible.

I am a published professional writer—journalism, poetry, essayist, creative nonfiction, so I expect a high level of composition competency. I can help those who are willing and committed to strengthening those areas they might be weak: MLA, transitions and use of texts for coherence, essay structure, paragraph and sentence structure, grammar, logic.

That said, submit your most polished and best writing. Do not submit drafts to me. Students only get to revise work that receives a failing grade and then this is only 1-2 times (depending on my mood—smile). There are only 4 major essays, if you fail more than one (1) you will probably not pass the class unless the other three essays receive As or As and Bs (smile).

None of the material is a fast read—skimming might be possible, but this class will not be a cake walk, so plan for it—leave time in your schedule for the work. A lot of assignments, especially reading and foundation exercises will be completed outside class. Students will be bringing work to class to share after reading, after writing, so for the class to move, to jump, to have energy, students need to stay on top of the work—all of it. (Much of the Writing Logically assignments can be written in the textbook.)—we will see each other in class just 150 minutes a week over 18 weeks. Let's commit to making it fruitful.

Student Code of Conduct

Students are responsible for complying with all college regulations and for maintaining appropriate course requirements as established by instructors.

Disciplinary action may be imposed on a student for violation of college rules and regulations, the California Education Code, California Penal Code, and the California Administrative Code.
Student misconduct may result in disciplinary action by the college and prosecution by civil authorities. Misconduct that may result in disciplinary action includes, but is not limited to, the following violations:

2.  Willful misconduct which results in injury or death of any person on college-owned or controlled property, or college-sponsored or supervised functions; or causing, attempting to cause, or threatening to cause physical injury to another person.

7. Dishonesty such as cheating, plagiarism (including plagiarism in a student publication), forgery, alteration of misuse of college documents, records, or identification documents, or furnishing false information to the college.

8. The use, sale, or possession on campus of, or presence on campus under the influence of, any controlled substance, or any poison classified as such by Schedule D in Section 4160 of the Business and Professions Code or any controlled substance listed in California Health and Safety Code 11053 et seq.,an alcoholic beverage, or an intoxicant of any kind; or unlawful possession of, or offering, arranging or negotiating the sale of any drug paraphernalia, as defined in California Health and Safety Code Section 11014.5

9. Possession, sale or otherwise furnishing any firearm, knife, explosive or other dangerous object, including but not limited to any facsimile firearm, knife or explosive, unless in the case of possession of any object of this type, the student has obtained written permission to possess the item from an authorized college employee.

10. Willful or persistent smoking in any area where smoking has been prohibited by law of by regulation of the governing board.

11. Lewd, indecent, or obscene conduct or expression on college-owned or controlled property, or at college sponsored or supervised functions; or engaging in libelous or slanderous expression; or expression or conduct which so incites students as to create a clear and present danger of the commission of unlawful acts on college premises, or substantial disruption of the orderly operation of the college.

12. Disruptive or insulting behavior, willful disobedience, habitual profanity or vulgarity; or the open and persistent defiance of the authority of, refusal to comply with directions of, or persistent abuse of, college employees in the performance of their duty on or near the school premises or public sidewalks adjacent to school premises.

13. Obstruction or disruption of teaching, research, administrative procedures or other college activities.

14. Committing sexual harassment as defined by law or by college policies and procedures; or engaging in harassing or discriminatory behavior based on race, sex, religion, age, national origin, disability, or any other status protected by law.

15. Persistent, serious misconduct where other means of correction have failed to bring about proper conduct.
 
Note:  I left out codes related to theft and aggressive acts against other persons, students or staff, such as assault or robbery or extortion or vandalism. I also did not include codes related to parking violations, unauthorized entry or use of college facilities.  I include codes students might not be aware of. All of the codes are in the College of Alameda Catalogue, 2009-2011, pages 212-213).

Class disruption (even on-line) or other violations can result in a two day or more suspension, failure or expulsion from the class or the college. Depending on the violation, a student can also be arrested and jailed.

Just think of it this way:
behave in a way that does not detract from another student’s positive learning experience. When in doubt, take the matter to the professor; do not get into an altercation with a classmate. If something inappropriate happens in class –on-line or in person, let me know. We are to maintain a professional relationship with each other. This is not the place to proposition or engage a classmate in conversation not connected to the course materials. Any attempt to do so is inappropriate and grounds for suspension and/or failure in the course. 

Students and staff have rights. In some of my classes in the past, I have noticed that some students are not familiar with the student code of conduct. I thought I’d share this with you so you would know what the codes are before you break them (smile). Most of it is common sense.

For the complete list as well as what laws protect students and the college, see the College of Alameda Catalogue.

Textbooks


We will travel through our four textbooks in the order mentioned earlier. All the books are fast reads, so do not get behind and decide soon what book you'd like to read for your final argument.
I have to approve it in advance.

Chimurenga, Thandizwe.  No Doubt: The Murder(s) of Oscar Grant. Los Angeles, The Ida B. Wells Institute, 2014.

Cooper, Sheila and Rosemary Patton. Writing Logically, Thinking Critically. Sixth Edition-Seventh. New York: Longman, 2010; 2012. Print.

Baldwin, James. The Fire Next Time. New York: Vintage International, 1993. Print.

Wise, Tim. Dear White America: Letter to a New Minority. San Francisco: City Lights Press, 2012. Print.

Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers. Fifth, Sixth or Seventh Edition. Boston: Bedford/St. Martins, 2008. Print.

Students also need a dictionary. I recommend: The American Heritage Dictionary. Fourth Edition.

Along with a dictionary, the prepared student needs pens with blue or black ink, along with a pencil for annotating texts, paper, a stapler or paper clips, a travel drive to save writing, a notebook, three hole punch, a folder for work-in-progress, and a divided binder to keep materials together.

The assignments list will follow tomorrow. Since students do not have the textbook yet, I have to adjust the assignment dates.

This syllabus is subject to change based on instructor assessment of class progress.

Thursday, May 23, 2013

The final went well today at Jim's. Students brought their abstracts and after realizing we would not be able to hear each other, we decided to write our comments on student abstracts. Take these comments into consideration when completing your self-reflection. It doesn't have to be long. Put in the section at the end called Final Presentation.

Congrats to Sarafina on graduating from high school and a acceptance at the college in Oregon. Congrats to Dylan and Sam on their transfers, Evelyn on her return to UC,  Delondo and Harold on graduation from COA and transfer, Mariah on her matriculation from COA and acceptance at St. Mary's.

Good luck to everyone. If you are still on campus this fall drop me a line sometimes and let me know how you are doing. You can always send me an email through my website.

Just in case you didn't hear me, portfolios are due tomorrow at 12 noon, but if you need more time, you have until Monday, May 27 at 12 noon. I will be on campus Tuesday, May 28, all day grading. You all have my number, call me if you have any questions.

I am reading essays now. Quite a few are not pasted and attached, which means I will not be able to read them until next week, if they are not resent correctly. My laptop is low in memory.

When I respond to your portfolios tomorrow and Monday-Tuesday, if they are missing anything or incorrect, I will email and call you.




Thursday, May 16, 2013

Final at Jim's Coffee Shop

Our final, Thursday, May 23, 10-12, will be held at Jim's Coffee Shop, 2333 Lincoln Avenue, Alameda, CA, (510) 523-5368  http://www.jimscoffeeshop.com/lincoln/index.php

After much deliberation we decided on this spot (smile). Come hungry with abstracts for your classmates. We'll sit around and share arguments. Thanks Andres for the tamales offer. We appreciate it.

If students missed today's class and have missed assignments, do not plan to present, but you can join us at breakfast. Let me know if you plan to come.  I made reservations for the 19 of us present this morning.

Outstanding revisions are all due by Friday, May 17, 2013, tomorrow, unless other arrangements have been made. Plan to drop by on Tuesday between 9-12 or 1-3 in A-205, for the Portfolio Workshop. There are no regularly scheduled classes next week.

Students let me know if I have missed their assignments. I will be grading assignments this weekend. Everything should be returned with grades by tomorrow. If you have a passing grade, put the revision (if required) in the portfolio.

Call me or drop by Tuesday with any questions. I have finals all day, 8-4 Wednesday.




Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Final Exam

The final is next Thursday, May 23, 2013, 10-12 noon. Students can present an essay written this semester. Presentations are to be 3-5 minutes. Bring a copy of an abstract for each classmate and me. No abstract, no presentation, no exceptions.

We will meet in A-202. If anyone wants to organize a party with refreshments, let me know (smile). We could also meet at a restaurant and present over breakfast. Any suggestions for an establishment?

English 5 Spring 2013 The Portfolio and Final Essay

The portfolio includes all the WLTC assignments completed. If they were completed in the book, just include the score where appropriate. Freewrites, reading logs, essays--all graded drafts and narratives (completed/revised). The only new essay is Analyzing an Extended Argument.

If you'd like to get feedback on the essay prior to submission send it to me and I will read it. Monday, May 20, 2012, when I am on campus all day, is a good day to do this. 

Cover page:
Include in the Portfolio Coversheet: Student Name, Address, Phone and Email, Course Name, Code and Semester


Narratives or Introduction to the Portfolio

Each narrative is about 250 words (you can write more) and they are the introduction to the portfolio.

Narrative or Essay 1 

Talks about the 18 week course: what you learned about writing and logic and thinking critically that you will carry forth into your lifelong pursuit of learning. 


Using the language of argument talk about the nature of critical thinking and what you are now capable of given this academic experience. Reflect on induction and deduction, the different fallacies and the kinds of arguments written: Rogerian, Definition, Taking a Stand, Extended Analogy, etc.
Also speak to the culture of the class: group work and peer critiques. How was this helpful with your own writing?  You can talk about books and other instruction materials.

Essay 2

The second narrative also 250 words minimally will talk about your revision process and what specifically you have learned about yourself as a writer that makes you a better writer at the end of the course than you were at the start. Use one-two graded essays as evidence. Also include citations from the essay(s) and a scholarly source like Diana Hacker's Rules for Writers. Make sure your MLA is perfect: in-text, works cited and essay formatting such as the heading and the header. 

Portfolio Guidelines for Submission and Assembly

This checklist can serve as the table of contents. Put a check next to the items to show inclusion in the portfolio. Use as the second page to the portfolio, after the cover sheet. Number the pages with a header. 

Name ______________________________
Date ______________________________
Class including class code and semester ____________________
Address _______________________________________
Phone number __________________________________
Email address__________________________________

ENG 5/ENG 211 Course codes: 20134, Tuesday/Thursday 11:00 AM to 12:15 PM


Class Meetings: January 22-May 16
Location: Room A-202

Final Exam:
Thursday, May 23, 2012, 10 a.m.-12 p.m.

Portfolios due via e-mail by Friday, May 24, 2013, 12 noon. Students can submit the portfolios earlier to coasabirenglish5@gmail.com)


May 21 9 - 12 noon; 1-3 p.m. 
Drop-in Portfolio assembly workshop in A-205 _______________

Portfolio Due Date
Portfolios due via e-mail by Friday, May 24, 2013, 12 noon. Students can submit the portfolios earlier electronically. Make sure you receive a receipt for your submission. No paper copies, no exceptions. 

Narratives 1 & 2

Writing Logically, Thinking Critically
1. Writing Assignments from WLTC

2. WLTC Assignments (If they were posted on the blog, copy and paste it here. If they are in the book, do not worry about it.)

The Arguments
Baldwin
Related assignments _______

Essay(s)________
Peer Reviews___
Revisions (how many?)_________
Revision Goals _______
Grade________


Tim Wise
Related Assignments______

Essay(s)________
Peer Reviews___
Revisions (how many?)_________
Revision Goals _______
Grade________


The Happiness Project
Related Assignments ________

Essay________

Peer Reviews___
Revisions (how many?)_________
Correction Essays_______
Grade________

The Central Park 5

Related Assignments_______
Essay________
Grade________

Final Argument

Final Presentation______
Abstract______
Grade on presentation_______
Self Reflection________

Freewrites and Cyber-Assignments 
Freewrites and Cyber-Assignments not connected to a text or already listed elsewhere in this portfolio. How many? ____________ 

Grade Justification
What grade do you think you've earned this semester? What evidence supports this conclusion? Use one of the three argument styles appropriate to your audience to prove your point. Use evidence as well. Do not forget the works cited page. 


Extra Credit_________
Students can turn in a graded essay from another course if the other teacher doesn’t mind. It has to use research and MLA style documentation, so certain courses are not applicable. 

Anything else? _____________________________________________

Teacher research

Can I use your work in presentations and publications? Would you like to be anonymous? If I plan on using your essays or work in a book, I will let you know and share any proceeds. 

Yes, I agree.
No, do not use my work.


Grades


Portfolio checklist _____________
Portfolio Essay 1_______________
Portfolio Essay 2_______________
Portfolio Grade_________

Course Grade_________

Final Week of Classes

Today we completed the film, The Central Park 5. Develop an Initial Planning Sheet and outline for
Writing Assignment 11 Analyzing an Extended Argument on Thursday (143-144). This is WA 12 in the 6th Ed. (151-154).

Complete the exercise. We will talk about fallacious arguments connected to TCP5 Thursday, May 16, 2013.  We will also complete the exercises assigned last week.


I will post the Portfolio Checklist today. Let me know Thursday, if there are any ungraded assignments outstanding.

Thursday, May 9, 2013

The Central Park 5

Today we watched an hour of the film, The Central Park 5, dir. Ken Burns (TRT 119 min.). Reflect on the film. Think about what you know about critical thinking. What fallacious arguments were presented? What do we know about motivation or intent? Think about the parties involved?

What arguments were used to criminalize the youth? Do any present cases come to mind? Historically this case is said to be similar to that of the Scottsboro Boys, nine teenage boys accused of the gang rape (in 1931) of two white girls in Alabama. The boys, like these kids 58 years later (1989) also didn't all know each other. All also professed innocence yet were convicted and later exonerated.

What would be Tim Wise and/or James Baldwin's take on the case? Baldwin is a native New Yorker who left the country because he could not abide its racism.

Homework: Writing Assignment 12 Questioning Generalizations (187). Choices 5 and 9. Use the story of the Central Park 5.  Respond in 250 words.

Thursday, May 15, 2013, we will look at Writing Assignment 11 Analyzing an Extended Argument on Thursday (143-144)